How Technology Affects Children’s Social Skills
This paper is to rewrite an add two additional resources to this paper1. introductory paragraph introduces the topic2. thesis statement is clear in indicating the argument being madeThe body of this rewrite includes1. The six sources take different perspectives, opinions, or conclusions on some aspect of the topic, and these distinctions are clear in the writing.2.Please include perspective of children, and why parental controls are important.3.The six sources are synthesized, not simply listed, with coherence and unity demonstrated in the paragraphs4. The body of the essay features paragraphs in which sources are used to support the arguments and integrating the sources with a balance of paraphrase and summary along with direct quotations5.Please do not add more than two additional sources in addition to the four already included.6. For this essay, you will use third-person point of view.Please do not use first person point of view (e.g., “I,” “me,” “we”) in writing this essay.In addition, please do not use second-person point of view (“you” or “your”) in writing this7.Included is the original draft.